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Not bad for what it is. Might want to pay a little closer attention to the placement of your elements, the amazing floating magical fantastical saxophone lost you half a star (Sax is "above" the hands. Not gripped in them.) Also you lost half a star for a stuttering loop. Like I said, for what it is, pretty decent.

Megaman511again responds:

Thanks, I'll pay more attention to the animating this time...

Good job. No glaring flaws on the sync that I noticed, and it's actually a pretty amusing little short. Could make a nice short series, actually. "Ball vs. pins" or something. Rock on.

davohsaurus responds:

Never actually thought about a series...you might be on to something sir.

Thanks for the kind words!

Most of the problems are in the first half. The music sets a pace that's a bit too frenetic right off the bat. Consider some sort of lead-in or fade. Also I found the action a little hard to follow at some points. Might want to add in a couple of short "pauses for breath" to let people take in the epicness they've just seen.

Overall, for something that started as a test, I think this is pretty decent. Nothing revolutionary, but I don't want my 30 seconds back either. Few tweaks and this could be a really solid short sequence.

SquirrelKidd responds:

Thanks a lot for this feedback, really helps! :D

Props.

Few people would have the balls to do this, man. I'm not military myself, but I got a lot of family and friends that are. We all hate how hyper-commercialized the day to remember our fallen troops has gotten. If you really feel the need to spend money on Rememberance or Memorial day.....buy your respective country's flag, and display it proudly. (end political rant)

BillyNapalm responds:

If I was in the military, I'd like this animation even more. I'd also be pissed off at any store that tried to capitalize on the day to sell blue jeans. I'M LOOKING AT YOU, MACY'S!

Nice

Awesome. And I love the use of the MKR theme in there, though I doubt many would recognize it.

RogerregoRRoger responds:

very many did actually

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